Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, 22 October 2019
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Wow Anna that is a good drawing.
ReplyDeleteI really like the detail and how you have EVE in there to. It is really cool that you have the Dreamworks logo and the stars on WALL - E´s eyes.
Maybe next time you can add the fishing rod for the Dreamworks boy and some more depth in the writing. But this is an overall drawing.
Have you made any other cartoon robot designs?
Hi Anna i like your Wall-e robot it reminds me of when i watch the move. i like how you aided Eve maybe next time you cloud make it easy to see Wall-e the man on the moon is cool
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