Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Thursday, 16 April 2020
church song
WALT: to write about this song link and what the message is.
it is pop music and the message is that jesus saved us.
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
tena koe e hoa Anna,
ReplyDeletethis is presented well and I think that its wonderful that you included the link,the song is overall a good song I think and it is definitely song about jesus dieing for us! next time work on adding a question to start a dialog.