Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, 29 May 2020
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To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
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Hi Anna, I really like your Dojo monster. I like how you have described his "marshmallow teeth". What is your monsters name? Next time maybe you could make the DLO a bit bigger as the dojo is quite small.
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ReplyDeletehi anna your mostter is very cute i love that vibrent colour blue what is your favrouit colour? mine is babay blue.
ReplyDeletemaby next time you colud ues more describing words in your description