Wednesday, 12 August 2020

would you rather movie star or sports star

WALT: provide reasons in an argument 

i didn't want to be either here's my argument 

would you like to be a movie star or a sports star or none

2 comments:

  1. Hi Anna
    You made a good pint about everyone being able to chose what they do in their future and I like that you chose to say that.
    I think I would rather be a sports star because I really enjoy sport.
    Keep up the good work,
    -Clara

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  2. Kia ora Anna
    I am Ronan from Rawhiti School. I like how you told us your answer coupled up with your reasoning. Maybe next time you could put in some punctuation and turn your i's into I's. I think I would like to be a sports star as I really enjoy football.

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