WALT: provide reasons in an argument
i didn't want to be either here's my argument
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
WALT: provide reasons in an argument
i didn't want to be either here's my argument
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Anna
ReplyDeleteYou made a good pint about everyone being able to chose what they do in their future and I like that you chose to say that.
I think I would rather be a sports star because I really enjoy sport.
Keep up the good work,
-Clara
Kia ora Anna
ReplyDeleteI am Ronan from Rawhiti School. I like how you told us your answer coupled up with your reasoning. Maybe next time you could put in some punctuation and turn your i's into I's. I think I would like to be a sports star as I really enjoy football.