this is my story i is a lamb
WALT: to write a story about other creatures
this is my story.
this is the link.
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1pjj_ghmDB8Lg1bX_HfjUBgGqtStKUCP-czmgRJn6fZU/edit?usp=sharingThursday, 19 November 2020
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Wow that story was pretty cute and funny! I liked your use of the conjunction 'because' in your sentences. Well done Anna, ka pai!
ReplyDeleteHi Anna, I love the 'disclaimer' at the start. Very engaging! It would be great to see your writing pasted on the blog so your readers don't have to click away. I would also love to see a picture of the lamb. What is the strangest animal you have had visit you at school and why?
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