WALT: is to explain Rhyme Alliteration and Imagery I worked with Holly to do this
Kia ora, I am a student at New Brighton Catholic School, Welcome - Haere Mai. I am in Year 6 and my teacher is Mr Gray. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Wednesday, 26 May 2021
1 comment:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Hi Anna, my name is Aisling and I am a student at NBC.
ReplyDeleteI really liked the way you made the words stand out.
Did you think about putting an image of a cat so others can understand what it is.
Maybe you could about putting more detail in your description of what an Alliteration is.
Why did you choose the color to be blue?
From Aisling